Hello today i made a poem about spring its a pretty short poem but i like it and my birthday is in spring :)
and i will be turning 10 on my birthday and bye.
Friday, August 27, 2021
Spring poem
Hello today i made a poem about spring its a pretty short poem but i like it and my birthday is in spring :)
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Hi Bradley, I love the way you decorated your poem. It really does make me think of spring. I bet you are excited to be turning 10 soon! Spring always make me think of baby animals like lambs and ducklings. Next time think about setting your poem out so that each idea is on a new line. Keep up the great work!
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Well done Bradley. The way you have chosen to present your poem reflects spring beautifully, and links in to your poem as you spoke of flowers and warmth. Blooming flowers are one of my favourite things about spring, how you seen any starting to grow during lockdown?
ReplyDeleteWell done for choosing to use yellow and green for your background which reminds me of spring, is there any other colours that can also be used to remind us of the season?
Great work!
Such an eye-catching DLO Bradley, I am very impressed! I have just checked out when your birthday is and it is in spring. It is in November the last month of spring. I have seen all the spring flowers starting to bloom when I have been out walking. Have you got any spring flowers blooming in your garden? I have also seen a couple of bees, have you seen any? Keep up the great blogging Bradley.
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