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Wednesday, April 7, 2021

Me me me


                            hi the 1st line is about my personality,the 2nd line is what i look like,the
                            3rd line is my personality and what i look like.       Before you go i hope
                             you like my poem? 
                            

                           

                                 

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4 comments:

  1. Michelle WilkinsonApril 9, 2021 at 6:33 AM

    Hi Bradley, I do really like your poem! You have created a very eye-catching DLO, well done. The words you have selected to describe yourself are perfect. Would you think about using an image next time you completed a DLO?

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    1. BradleyApril 13, 2021 at 11:01 AM

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    2. BradleyApril 13, 2021 at 12:05 PM

      thank you but what did you look at did you look at what i looked like or did you look at my persanality and my appreance.

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  2. SialeApril 14, 2021 at 12:15 PM

    Hey Bradley,

    Your poem is really interesting . You sound like a very fun and unique person. Your DLO is really eye-catching because of the bright colours you used. Would you think of having a photo of yourself on the DLO?

    Keep up the great work!

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